Cynara

Oh my God! :shock: What happened to Jacob? You're good, evil good :twisted:. Making me wanting to read more... That is mean you better post more, 'cause I so totally ...

Hey there! Ha I get to review you first! :) I'm going to be so mean you wont know what hit ya!!! :twisted: Just kidding!! :mrgreen: OK first I'm going ...

Here there! :D First thing I have to say is: I LOVE this story :smt007 . I read all your chapters! :smt026 It keeps me wanting more :smt024 I look ...

This was great!!! :smt038 As I told you not very long ago, I feel very addicted to this story. :smt024 So, don't be mean :smt079 :smt064 and post more! ...........Or ...

Hey there! :) You have a good story here and I hope you continue it. OK, time for my critique. :) Tatum broke off from the kiss and put his ...

Hey there! :) Ok first of all let me say this is awsome! :D Read all the chapters and Loved them. Ok one of the things that I've noticed is ...

Hey! :) Cynara here! Let's get started. The first thing I'm going to say is that it was too short. :x I'm not saying I like testaments or anything, but ...

Hi! :) Cynara here! Ok now lets go to your review :wink:. First of all you had a lot of periods placed where there should be commas. One little example ...

Hey! Cynara here ready to give my little opinion. Ok, lets start. First of all, I think youre going a little bit too fast (my opinion). In the first chapter ...

Hi! Cynara here ready to put your head on a chopper :twisted: . Just kidding :lol: . I really liked this a lot. Like for real. My deary of a ...

Hi! :) Cynara here. First of let me tell you I loved your story :D . You got me out of my boredom. Seriously it was killing me :( . ...

Blue! Loved it! Really I did. I'll look forward for the next one. You better post it soon... or else :twisted:. You know what that means! As for a review... ...

Okay a few things I noticed when I was reding: He only went inside the café because it was the first place he’d spotted where he could smoke inside. It ...

Grammar: [quote ]"Killed." I growled out loud. That's what they were going to do to me the Carverians family. All because I wasn't ready to settle down with their oldest ...

Hi. Socks here! That was hands down hi-la-rious. My friend and I were almost tearing up. Im not a fan girl, but I do love twilight. Anyways I thought it ...