CyberGenji

Hi ! Thank you so much for the review and I'm going to take each point you made to heart, i really really appreciate it. And I'm extremely sorry about ...

honestly it did help, that's exactly what i was going for, since a sudden jumpscare with a mythological monster would feel a little cheap in a way. but yes, thank ...

ah okie now the repetition makes a lot more sense, thank you for clarifying, i'm actually very happy to hear about the autistic representation. i'm more so excited to read ...

i would again like to say thank you for the review. it really helps me improve my writing.

Hi there, I'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your work today. 1. "a lone tear streaking down his face."- i think that "tears welled up in his eyes" would work ...

thank you so much for taking the time to review this, i'll take your tips to heart. i made use of the strong language basically to pinpoint the fact that ...

thank you so much for your review like i said i'm really new, not just to this website but to the whole writing thing. I'll keep the tips in mind ...

thank you so much for your review ! it means a lot to me, and the spaces between the last words of the sentences and question marks were totally unintentional ...

Thank you very much for pointing out my mistakes, i'm very new at this and i'm so thankful that you liked it !

Thank you very much for pointing out my mistakes, i'm very new at this and i'm so thankful that you liked it !

Thank you very much for pointing out my mistakes, i'm very new at this and i'm so thankful that you liked it !

Thank you very much for pointing out my mistakes, i'm very new at this and i'm so thankful that you liked it !