Curlyqpride

Haha, thank you so much for reading! Your review was helpful! Yes, I agree I guess the nevers did get a bit out of line. XD

Youch... I'm gonna be completely honest, that is one of the harshest critiques I've ever received, stung a bit. Otherwise, it did help, thank you so much for reading. Not ...

Haha thanks. Well this really was a doodle type of piece, I kinda wrote what came to mind and didn't really edit. However all your advice really helped! This was ...

Thank you so much! Haha! *highfive* Yess Death Note fan! It's ok you don't like the pairing :P I realize the story is more humor based then romance based anyway. ...

Genuis genuis genuis! I love it! I would give a longer review, but I must depart the computer, I will soon review again. XD

Thank you oh-so fab Clo! I will get on those mistakes pronto!

LOL! About the old lady thing, I guess it must be a common for curly hair!! I always have teachers wild over my hair XD Thank you soo much :wink: ...

Woah fangala! Where'd you find this old hunk of junk? LOL, this is my first and suckish lol. But ur suggestions make alot of sense! I know now not to ...

Thank you so much everyone! *blushes* You all are so nice!

This story still haunts me, lol, PLEASE MAKE MORE! :D

Wow. This is so gooood!!!! I wish I could write poetry like this . :lol:

:lol: I still think it is horrible, I wish I never posted it.

Thank you all so much! It won't be too long till the 4th chapter! :D

Ya, I understand, that is something I was actually worried someone would say, this is not my good work at all, but I was hoping it did show the feeling ...

This was really breathtaking! Wonderful job, can't wait to see it in a book one day! -Curly