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Re: A Short Ode to Here
Wow! This is awesome! It's a simple idea, and with a lot of descriptions, so it's even more beautiful. I love the line about a book not being plugged in! ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: A Pool of Tears
That's amazingly wrong and disturbing. I love it! The only thing I could possibly nitpick about is int he first paragraph, where there's an extra comma on the first line. ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Wow! This is… shockingly awesome. I guess that's the only way I can describe it. All the words are perfectly put, and everything is just… wow. One part that kind ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Pompeii is burning
OK, can't bring myself to do a horrible, nitpick-y review. So, I just wanted to say; this. is. AMAZING!! IT'S SO AWESOME! Descriptive, disturbing, slightly wrong, and very, very original. ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Isn't it beautiful? (spoken)
Hey, CuriosityCat here for a review! I just wanted to start off saying that this is awesome! The imagery and the script patterns in the poem…. it's just giving you ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Unclean
Oh WOW!!! This is so disturbing! I mean, in a good way. What creepy thoughts! But I'm still a little fuzzy about what happened. So, people were messing with this ...
Mar 26, 2014 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
Hey, CuriosityCat, here to review! I just wanted to say, first thing, that this is really funny! Mulan is probably laughing in her grave. I was part of the school ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Nobody Sees
This is fantastic! I really wish more people thought about this. People always are judging and jeering, and I think your poem captured that perfectly. Why don't people consider how ...
Feb 5, 2014
