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Re: There's no place
Hello , here is a review for you. You don't want these words to fly- This one, great. But after it: -in silence let them quiver, in silence You said ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: bathing suit
Very nice. But remember to add commas, etc.. As make sure that you capitalize the first letter. Very important. Also I have some advice: Describe things better. Example: I'll sit ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: An Iowa Evening
Hello FaeHope; I am new to YWS so sorry if my review isn't as good as the others. I love this poem. Its peaceful, and well done with making the ...
Apr 9, 2015