CsJ93

This really blew my mind. Once again you have done a great job! This was really creepy and scary, in a good way though. It was kind of gross too ...

I think your imagery was AMAZING! It sounded as if you were writing a poem and not a story. It was Fantastic. I'm really interested in seeing where this story ...

It's starting to get really really interesting! There were a few grammer and spelling errors but I'm guessing you were just writing really fast, because that's what happens to me. ...

hey man! way cool beginning. I think you could go a lot of different ways with this story. I'm excited to read the rest of it! I'm guessing your going ...

When i first started reading this I was like wow he was in a bad mood...but then you turned it into something really beautiful and true. The anger part was ...

Ok you read this out loud to me and it was still really amazing! but reading it and being able to reread certain stanzas and stuff just made it so ...