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CrystalCore

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Chapter 1: Encounter

    thanx for reviewing ^^ if only i could get the spirit to write the next part :p

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My story.

    Thank-you for reviewing ^^ The phrase about the book and my friend keeping me company is not well structured mainly because i was planning on writing something different but in ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My story.

    Can't be bothered to right more :p this is only a short story ^^ but thankyou for reviewing.

    Oct 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My story.

    Hehe, its just that on the french key board doesn't have "I"s and i just forget to go back on them. I've got to admit that i didn't get to ...

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My story.

    Just another typicall life but you just have to find out how special that one is ^^. hehe french comming in again

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The dawn.

    Hey thankyou so much for the review. So for the mother problem ... well the mother wasn't expecting to meet the fater in the throne room and wanted her to ...

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Culture Re: A rift in reality~Teaser

    hehe no probs ;)

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The dawn.

    Thankyou so much for reviewing. In no way would i take this in a harsh way because your taking some time to review my story, so i can only be ...

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Chapter 1: Encounter

    Maybe i should have reread my text before posting it ^^' sorry about all that. I'm sure that with this help i'll be able to find a few more errors ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Chapter 1: Encounter

    thankyou for the help ^^ and don't you worry i got the story all figured out :p but if your expecting some action thats not whats gonna happen =.= I'm ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Chapter 1: Encounter

    Thankyou so much for that comment !!! It really helped me out for several questions i've been asking myself (especially for dialogue). I'm not actually english and well i was ...

    Oct 9, 2013


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