Crysi

*grins* Thanks guys! Yeah, I know I ended it in an odd place... It's not really the end of Chapter 1 yet. At least, I don't think it is. I ...

LOL. I love this. It's creepy and hilarious and... wow. I love the flashback, lol. Poor girl. Cute story, though. Even if it is a bit... well... you know. ;)

Yes, yes, it's all very good and all... BUT WHERE IS THE SINGING QUARTET?! Hmph.

I second (third?) what 'Reida and Mesh said. The quartet is totally awesome. This whole thing is awesome, actually. Go Grif!

Yeah, I JUST wrote this tonight for my homework assignment, lol. Your two cents are appreciated - I'm trying to decide if I should workshop this at school and I'd ...

Merci. :) I tend to write how I speak, and I didn't comb over this as thoroughly as I could have.

I love this! Short but powerful. I agree, the ending was beautiful. I think the whole thing was cool, though. Looks like your interest in ships is coming through in ...

Yeah, sorry about that. I thought about it while I was posting - "I wonder if he updated it..." - but by then it was really late and I figured ...

JACK! You should know better than to post when I have a lot of work to do and I need to get to bed early! *laughs* You're really churning these ...

More to read and critique! Yay! :D This weekend has been my Pirates of the Caribbean obsession weekend, so I'm totally in the mood to read this story. The envelope ...

Lol! I kinda like that, actually. Although of course I'm thinking about novel proportions instead of the short-story bite I'm supposed to write. Gah.

I'm just looking for an interesting short story, lol. Just a little piece of fiction, that's all. Snoink, thanks, lol. I'll have to post some of my other work to ...

Lol!! The title was crazy, but I knew it would be explained well because you're a good writer. I loved this! It was adorable! I could see every action clearly, ...

Teehee, I love these! Very cute. Good job on the rhyming and rhythm.

I hate when all I have to say is, "What 'so-and-so' said." Unfortunately, I have to say it again: What 'Reida said. Everything she said. I absolutely adore your imagery... ...