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Re: The Perfect Life
Excellent.. wow. Interesting.. I was in Tyler's position once. Very scary. One thing I want to comment on.. (Aris moves toward him and they begin kissing again. After a few ...
Dec 12, 2004 -
Re: Finals
*nods* Definitely. It shows how everyone is so stressed out about finals that they go insane for a bit, easily taking it out on others. I remember trying to study ...
Dec 11, 2004 -
Re: Chapter 1 of Regicide
Lol, we just learned the word regicide in English.. Technically, it's the murder of a ruler, not necessarily a king. When Abraham Lincoln was assassinated, for instance, that was regicide. ...
Dec 11, 2004 -
Re: Very offensive sorry -tad
LOL! Omg, that was great.. especially the last line. It was sickly hilarious. By the way, I have nothing against gay people either. One of my very good friends is ...
Dec 9, 2004 -
Re: Raising Mother
Sad but excellent. It felt extremely realistic. Kind of reminded me of the movie Second Hand Lions. Good movie. And good story by you lol. I love how Jo (wow, ...
Dec 3, 2004 -
Re: Embers of Love
Wow. Amazing. I love it!! :D Very powerful. I've felt a hatred similar to that before.. I can tell you, that's an accurate description. If only I hadn't deleted the ...
Nov 30, 2004 -
Re: Your Turn...
I had to read over those sentences a few times too.. Also, I found a few spelling errors :P “Oh my! Your hurt!” You're, not your. “Oh, of coarse! There’s ...
Nov 29, 2004 -
Re: Shortish story
Well, there's no editorial comments I can give that other's haven't already given, so.. Bravo! That was EXCELLENT! I could totally imagine the switch from peace to destruction. It was ...
Nov 23, 2004
