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Okay, the children have had their fun, time to go hardcore on yo' ass! Z03 said she 'spotted no grammatical errors'. That's cute, but it's also wrong. "Plip. Plip.Plip" I ...

Dawnpath, I totally agree with you, the way you have broken up the text makes it read in a far more interesting way than it would do otherwise. I review ...

I have to admit, this will not be overly complementary, but I see you've had your quota of semi-pointless yet quaintly charming praise from other reviewers. I'm reviewing as I ...

Ok, I recognise you from innumerable SB's, so I thought I'd review one of your other pieces. I will not read the other reviews yet, as I want to come ...

I have never read the Shining, but that might just have to change now. As tributes go, this one hit the jackpot. I've got to admit, I adored the style ...

I have one word to describe that. Wow. And I really do mean that; I have a lot of time for this kind of writing, and I love to see ...

Managed to miss the box there. Whoops! Whoa, that was a good one. I haven't reviewed for ages, but I'm glad I picked this one to start again. I'm going ...

Just to add to Leahweird's humiliation, there's nothing wrong with putting the word 'seeming' into that sentence. However, you did refer to the shadows as 'Inaminate'. Inaminate is not a ...

More nitpicks ;) Leahweird missed a few in my opinion. Watch your tenses. You are in first person, in past tense. Stick with it, and make sure you don't come ...

Just a few nitpicks really. Firstly, watch your spelling, grammar, tenses and this will be a lot better. Check things out if you're not sure. For example, it's MACH not ...

Well it looks like some people are harder to please than I am, as i really enjoed your work. I haven't read the other work that you've posted, but this ...

Okay, that was different. But in a good way. If I'm honest, I thought twice about reading this. 21st century Mozart? I thought. What a load of rubbish. Truthfully, I'm ...

Wow, can't believe I'm the first to review this. I guess it's the title scaring people off because they expect the whole piece to be in German. Personally I found ...

Um, well this will probably prove pointless as the above review has most likely covered everything I had intended to say, but oh well. I have to agree with MSDavies ...

Ah. Midgit. Didn't know you'd written this... I feel soft for saying it after twit there ripped you to pieces, but this was pretty good. My only question is, what ...