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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Deadly Party Part 1: Introductions

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Past

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Southern Summer Soliloquy

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Camping Trip

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: you will be loved.

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Place

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tourist

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Please Delete

    A very moving and intesting story, definately one of my favourites. My favourite line was: "Sanura," my father spoke in a kind patronising tone, "would you like to go to ...

    Mar 8, 2008


We are all broken. That's how the light gets in.
— Ernest Hemingway