Crimsona

Much :)

I wrote a reply but for some reason it won't post on here. I'll PM my ideas to you.

Thank you very much for your review! I might try and change a few of the more awkward lines at some stage. I'm very glad that it brought the message ...

Thank you for your review! I'll have to check out your poem. :) You're completely right about the 'Oh no.' part, that will be changed immediately. Thanks again and I ...

Pleasure :)

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it, I will make those changes. Thanks again. :)

Thank you for the review, Iggy, it was really helpful! I'll take your suggestions on board and make a few changes. :)

Thank you Bobby, your kind comments mean a lot! Hehe I remember being like that when I was about 9/10 as well.

^ Ah yes that's what it was, I was playing with enjambment but I clearly have a long way to go.

Thank you very much for your review. As I said on the chat, it was very helpful and has picked up on a few things that I would have totally ...

Thank you very much for your review, Subtle! Oh goodness I didn't even notice the repetition of 'damn' >.< You're completely right, I'll take out the second one. I completely ...

Fantastic, even better than before! Good job :D

You are so sweet and kind! That review really made my day, thank you so so much! I totally get your point of the the ending of lines as beginning ...

Thank you very much for your kind review, it's always great to hear positive feedback! :D

Thank you very much, I will make those corrections.