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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Big City Girl prologue

    Please, please, please, please finish it! I really enjoyed the beginning and I really want to read the rest of it. It is very well written, and I really liked ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Dianna McKenna

    Definitely a good start. It was enjoyable to read and I hope you write more of it, because I really liked it, and when it ended I said 'Wait, what? ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: When I Died...

    This was really good. I saw the two paragraphs and I thought this would be super short and not much of a story, but you blew me away. I never ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: White America

    This was a good poem. I liked the focus of repeating America in every line. It was interesting, because I'm an American and the way you spelled color (colour) I'm ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I will always love you. *old*

    This was great. I loved it. There was a few grammar errors but other than that it was fantastic. I loved the form of a letter, I thought that was ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Always and forever

    The poem was great. I really enjoyed it. I liked how the stanza were short and got to the point. And the poem was written very well and it put ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: For years.

    This poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. The rhyming was clever, not cheesy. I really like how you alternated between couplets and quadrants (I think that's what ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    Great poem. It is very deep. And I read this while listening to my younger sister play Ke$ha. Which says a lot because Ke$ha's music is not deep at all, ...

    Jul 13, 2011


When you cut pieces out of the truth to avoid looking like a fool, you end up looking like a moron instead.
— Robin Hobb