CreativelyWritten

Thanks. I'm glad it was interesting. However, I do not think this was too short as I was just doing a flash fiction. If you were saying you want to ...

The name wasn't included because this was just a quick flash fiction to stimulate the creative flow. I will however hopefully take up your advice and add description! I can't ...

Thank you very much for the review. I do see your point on the not getting any answers front. However I myself didn't know where this was going (not good ...

This story was really, really beautiful. I don't mean the content but the words. It wasn't just sentences telling what happened. It was painting a picture and speaking a poem ...

This poem is written so well. I love it. There's so much truth to it but that's not the only thing that's great. The way it was worded is just ...

Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate it. I won't be changing the wording despite your suggestions. If I tailor it too much it will change the flow that I have ...

Thank you so much! I got the idea for the poem from an image I saw on Tumblr. It said something along the lines of 'I met the Devil. I ...

Thank you for taking the time to read. Yes I purposely split it up so it forces the poem to be read in lines of three. I'm sorry you don't ...

I don't have any advice to fix this. I don't know that it's a poem... but I don't know the definition of poetry really. But.... I LOVE THIS TO PIECES. ...

I really love this poem. It's like you're trying to trick yourself into believing that the devil are the ruthless people of the world when in reality it's you. It ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you found meaning in it and that it was coherent enough for you to understand haha

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Thank you! :)

Thank you so much for your lovely review! I try to write poetry and have a really hard time so I was very shocked to hear it was good enough ...

I loved the line: "In reality, nature is much less sympathetic." The reason I loved it so much is because it immediately talking about sunny, beautiful weather which we don't ...