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Re: The Angel - Rated 18+ (STRICTLY!!!!!!!!!)
Ok this poem is Great.:) It shows how you felt and also what you she looks like. I dont know why people are asking how does this fit in dramatic ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Touchable
Hi first Hello.:) Im sorry If i come on strong, I am just very blunt. I think your poem is kind of a mess. You were trying to show the ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Reality
I love the idea you were trying to reach, I just dont think you accomplished it.:/ I'm sorry but i'm going to be very blunt. the poem could of been ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Cost
This poem is really Interesting, I kinda Love it!:) one thing is that i think you should first re-read it before posting it. The poem rymes, but not on a ...
Nov 8, 2010