CrazyMonkey

Hey, i really like this poem, it shows lots of great emotions and shows just how connected you are with ur past childhood. although, i think that the line that ...

this story is great and full of emotion and has lot of great descriptions like in the first part, it says, 'The stars looked like tiny droplets of light hanging ...

i like the way this story is aimed at everyone, like 'you always subconsciously looking for your next (or first)' or like 'Even if you don’t think you have a ...

i love how it starts, i will only read a book if i understand the begining and it gets strait into the action and you can almost feel wha shes ...

i think this poem is great and you hav added lots of detailed descriptions wich mkes it sound amazing. but there are a few senteces that i would just make ...