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Sure! Feel free to tag me in it.

I'm cool with a ramble~ Also, if you decide to keep the Netflix scene, you can have her remark on how odd the whole situation is: zombies at the front ...

Ah, I see. Thanks for explaining it :)

Thanks for the review! I can understand how this can be a bit confusing. The direction/ theme of this poem is traditional vs. modern, conformity vs. individuality, society vs. identity. ...

Guys guys, please be nice and do not hash it out in the comments. :)

You're welcome.

Yeah, I see what you're saying. Thanks for pointing those out~

Thanks~

Thank you!

Thanks! I'm not naturally wired as a poet so I didn't know if this was any good. It's awesome that this resonated with someone and I'll certainly give poetry a ...

Wait Hermzez why am I the co-author of this nonsense xD And I agree with KnightTeen that the format could have been better, along with the few spelling errors. Like ...

It's not supposed to be clear, long and descriptive sentences that go on and on about the POV's struggle. That would defeat the purpose. When someone has depression everything seems ...

thanks~ :D

Why thank you.

My original intention was to make it something that everyone can relate to, but I decided later that I wanted it to focus on depression. And I'll keep your suggestions ...