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bubblewrapped i really liked it, everybody else has said everything i picked up on so all i can say is i liked it :D

You are honestly amazing Dusky, I can't wait to read more. Good luck editing the Bearer and Im still in line for a copy :D

Yum, Ice Cream...Now you've done it! I want some....and i cant have any *cries* Happy now you've made you big sister cry? Lmao, naw its sweet Mel really it aimed ...

Oh I love it Bubble, its really sweet and really cute and i have a secret love of butterflys. I'm obsessed! But now thats out in the open i must ...

Lol, i know, i know terrible grammar! so ive been told many, many times! I am however slowly getting better. But now im going to keep my text book on ...

Ok heres some more i just wrote. I'm not very good with conversation so it's not that good. “Alright, what about a keg? We have to have one” Luna laughed ...

Everybody happy now? :D Thanks for all the help Sam and thats for offering ladydark! I'll post more soon

ok, im really sorry but my computers playing silly games and i cant fix anything right now! you'll have to wait like um...er...um three days maybe because then ill be ...

*sighs* Ok ok, fixing it right now!

Oh i'm ever so sorry! if it makes you feel any better both dogs are still breathing, The next door neighbour put them out before any serious damage was done ...

Thanks for being so honest Sam! Yeah i know im grammatically challenged and this peice is pretty old, just something that was kicking around somewhere and i found it so ...

Wow Duskie, you are so talented! I really liked this peice, for a little while at the beginning i was competly lost but thats just because I had a late ...

Whoa, Normally age shouldnt matter at all but you are an amazing writer for your age. It was a very cute and funny peice, life was so simple, back in ...

This poem has great imagery i really did enjoy reading it. Its a good length too, when i attempt poems they are always really long winding, everything i do is ...

I dont want to clog everything up with repeats so i just back up everything Writersdomain said. Good Work!