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I already told you that i love it. Just thought id, well idk what i thought. That was really amazing Jig, gripping. I couldnt stop reading, i think it works ...

I think Bubbles has covered it all really and im not the best at Criting, being hopeless at grammer and spelling doesnt help my cause much. Like she said i ...

wow set it out properly first so more people will make the effort to read it, i got about half way through and then had to stop because my eyes ...

*shudders* ok, now im going to lock my wardrobe everynight and shut the freaken window! damn lol anyway, is damn a swear word? oh well anyway, um, it was really ...

Anne Frank, those two words always make me sigh, she is such a sweetie! I adore her, I read the book when i was seven then started my own diary ...

Thats just what we needed, we being myself and Rainbow Dash, naturally! No seriously that was extreamly good, so funny! I want a little 'Faithful' now 'spesially if he thinks ...

Oh god. That was really creepy. I wouldn't want to read that at night, it would give me nightmares of my own. Ha ha, I did read that at night ...

Something just a little nuts, thats just what i needed to start off my Friday night. Now all i need is my dancing shoes and some friends. Ok, i have ...

OK, firstly I just want you to know that i really did like this, which is extremely bizarre because generally I can’t stand anything to do with Vampires. I did ...

wow *singsoffkey* that was really good, I would try and crit it but it's almost midnight and there are trucks thundering through my brain. I'll give it a go in ...

And to think, I was happy playing with poo on a stick and laughing at dead cats when I was nine! Anyway, about the poem it is so cute! and ...

It was very good, wonderful description. There were just a few small mistakes, typo's probably. If only she could feel wha that girl was feeling again. It was as if ...

It's sweet and cute but thats about it :D sorry Sis, Like snoink said work on your timing and it will be a lot better, your definatly improving though and ...

Honestly? I just couldn't manage to read this at all, It may have been the fact that it wasn't seperated out or the fact that it didn't hold my attention, ...

ok, theres just one thing thats really bothering me that the others didnt pick up, other than that everything i had to say has been said. A thin strip of ...