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Re: Can Nature Be Haunted Too
This is a very awesome poem! From the use of imagery to the sort of eerie tone that I'm getting perfectly captures the essence of it. The last line, "Can ...
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Re: Holder
This poem is extremely heartfelt and moving. I think you really set the tone well for this. I admire how deeply you go into the lines "I have been apologizing ...
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Re: voices i cant remember and disembodied feelings
Wow the shape of this poem is very interesting. Your use of imagery and vocabulary is really cool. My favorite lines are probably "kissing lips like tongue twisters, kissing wounds/created ...
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Re: Under the miseltoe
I think this is a really cute story. I love the dialogue between the characters and I can clearly tell they have a lovely relationship between them. What I recommend ...
Dec 1, 2023
