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I do have an original work up! I'll tag you in the first chapter. Also, I'm legitimently crying from your comment on how I would be able to write glimmers ...

Go right ahead :)

Thank you! And I'm proud to have one of my stories be your first review!

Oh, I'm so sorry! This is a short story! I never planned for a second part! You're the second person to say that now...

Thank you! It's just a first draft, so much will change! Thank you for the help. :D

@LittleLee @Gravitem Figured you two would be the ones that might care about this story... It has one of the lines I'm most proudest of that I've written in it, ...

Thank you!! I appreciate the feedback, as it%u2019s only a first draft and I need all of the help I can get. I spent so long on my characters, and ...

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No, no! You good, my dude. My grammar is what i need to work, especially tenses. I really need a trick for that, to be honest. Thank you!

Aw!

@IcyFlame You posted on my welcome page post about being open to reading if I post something. It's ok if you don't! : )

Based on the song paper crowns by alec benjamin. Thank you @LittleLee for the suggestion! This is not a good story in my opinion, definitely among some of my worse ...

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@Em16

An eternity with Life. And he would be ending lives of things trying to harm the humans, keeping them from dying in return.