Cotton

hi there! you joined THIS MORNING? welcome! :D :D I know you'll love it here on YWS - I know I do xD since you are brand-spanking new and shiny, ...

hi :) what a powerful piece! You expressed your character's confusion really well, and I was generally very impressed with your style - you have some good panache (and if ...

hey there :) congrats on having the ambition the write a novel! It's a really hard slog but if you're determined and have your goal, it's perfectly achievable so the ...

hi there :) we're just starting studying American civil rights from the end of the civil war so I thought I'd give this a read, and I'm rather glad I ...

hey :) good luck in the competition! Well done for getting inspired etc etc, although if you can think about putting the thing you got from the generator as an ...

hey!! I'm back baby, and I PROMISE I'm not freakforchrist in disguise :P (she said, pretending to be in on the YWS goings on and probably failing miserably, due to ...

hey :) I really wanted to come and review and say something meaningful that will help you but - darn it, there's very little I can say. That's all your ...

hi there :) you joined on my birthday! irrelevant information, but still. nice coincidence... I liked your story, but in parts it was quite unclear. The opening was snappy and ...

ah! avast! a fellow symbolism-ist! lovely to meet you :) You don't need me to tell you that your characterisation was great and believable, and that clearly you knew exactly ...

oh hello again... apparently I've found all your posts in quick succession :) I notice that you joined yesterday, so welcome! I've just come back from being the Prodigal Son ...

hi :) so... wow. Writing about something with such gravitas as this is really brave (I'm wrestling with a similar writing conundrum at the moment, and I think I'm going ...

hey :) perfectly creepy! I love the idea of this piece, and it's wonderfully concise so I really got the feeling of this weird, fleeting encounter that was utterly absurd. ...

hey :) I'm guessing this is for the Big Contest, and so good luck! I like your sense of humour here (sorry, I guess that's "humor" for you :P) and ...

hey :) for what you claim to be "jotting down of fears" this is wonderfully lyrical (haha, exactly like the forum says!) and flows really, really nicely. Your rhyme scheme ...

Hey... here as promised :) Well, I like your style, general use of language etc etc. Boring comment I know but it's true. It's very accessible and stuff. :) honest... ...