Cosmic

Dear Nikki, This was amazing! I mean real top of the line work here. My gosh, Nikki! I don't know what to say. It was so deep. I don't know ...

Hello, Macs. This was horribly sad. I like the way it was written, though. It takes a lot of courage to write about something dear to your heart and I ...

Hello, Xio. I especially enjoyed this story. It had me hooked from the first line really, if you want to hear the truth. Which I suppose you do. I really ...

Hello, Poet. Cosmic here! You'll be my fifth review for Review Day! *grabs Bold pen* In a land, were where men no longer stand, but rather ironically crawl[/b], Take out ...

Excuse me while I grab my pen that writes in bold. Corrections, as you probably concluded from the above sentence, will be written in bold. I gasp in Delight; as ...

I saw a curious thing to me, This sentence is worded awkwardly and I think it is the result of you trying to hard to continue the rhyming scheme. I ...

Hello again! So he isn't afraid? What a concept. It's ironic that he would name her Joy, especially since she was supposed to terrify him. I also like the idea ...

Hello, Aqua! I'm Cosmic, or Val. Whichever you want to type. I hope I do your story well. A child’s fear I'm sure there should be some type of puncuation ...

Hello, Lovetowrite. Well, he wouldn’t ` be going anywhere now. The apostrophe that I put in bold should be taken out. I heard someone scream, but I didn’t have to ...

This is my first review, I hope I don't do your story well. I've seen other people use this form of reviewing so I'll try it out. Corrections in a ...