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Re: See Red, Hear Red, Feel Gray
Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review ^-^ I love how much you loved it. I really appreciate how you and fortis really helped with the end line, ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: See Red, Hear Red, Feel Gray
Thanks for the awesome review ^-^ I definitely have trouble with last lines, so that's something I need to work on. I will definitely take your advice into account when ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: For VeerenVKS
Ha, that's actually one of my pet peeves too; I feel like it just makes for a cheap rhyme. I actually didn't notice that, so thanks for pointing it out! ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: For VeerenVKS
(sorry not haiku, limerick) @IronSpark
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: For VeerenVKS
Hi, and thanks for the review ^_^ This was meant to be a haiku, which might disregard all of your suggestions. However, I will definitely take them into account on ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: A Letter From Hell
Length, capitalization, and rhyming are all stylistic choices
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
omg I do this all the time it's terrible....I promise I'll get to it soon
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: Permanent Sleep
For some reason I feel like this is about a transgender teen suicide letter to his/her parents? I'm probably completely off mark though xD
Aug 21, 2015 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
I was grinning like an idiot while singing along to this
Aug 14, 2015 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
This is my new favorite theme song.
Aug 14, 2015 -
Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back
Double feature?! Yay!
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?
This is embarrassing >_< But still. Great poem xD
May 24, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
Will review soon
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
(I meant without the added ands, I like them. I suggest leaving them how they are)
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
I like the comma splices. It depicts a certain character.
May 17, 2015
