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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bulimia.

    Amazing, reminds me of my freshman year. It's almost hard to understand, kind of. There is so many metaphores people could aquire from this poem, I think that's good. I ...

    May 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Magic and Mischief (Prologue)

    Way to much description, and your story is a bit confusing. I understand that it is a prologue, but you need to make it a little more interesting. I bet ...

    May 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chalk to the Sidewalk

    I really liked the poem. I read ALOT of poems and this was one of my favorites, mainly because it reminds me of myself. I try so hard to erase ...

    Jul 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Shadows : Chapter 1

    I really liked it. But you used ALOT of discriptive words. I have read tons of books, and I noticed that the more popular books don't have alot of descriptive ...

    Jul 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Truth About Queens

    That's kind of funny. You do have a point though, no one tries to look at it from the evil queens perspective. Adults try to teach childeren right and wrong, ...

    Jul 28, 2008


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci