ConformandObey_ItsFun

October Girl - Thanks for the advice. I did notice some things didn't work, but I wanted to post what I had before I lost it, haha. I lose everything. ...

Acoustic- Well, thanks for liking it, and no, I wasn't on drugs. Still not. I just might as well be with the way my mind works sometimes, haha. I didn't ...

Yeah. That's actually exactly what it is, but I was messing with it and just separated the lines of a rant I wrote. Someone liked it and said I should ...

Firestarter- Wow. I'm extremely sorry. I was in a huge rush to get to my next class and I forgot to rate it. It won't happen again! Sorry again! -------------- ...

Cicero- Thanks for the critique. And I can't believe I missed that wails/whales thing. I feel pretty dumb right about now. And no, I don't need to rhyme, and even ...

Wow! That was wonderful! Very impressive. I honestly don't see anywhere you absolutely need any changes. At all. Woohoo! Go you!

You know, I think you have a great start. There were a few errors in there, but I think mostly everyone else has pointed them out to you. I like ...

Hmmm, well, there are a few things I would change about it. Though, I must say, your writing is better than mine was at your age. Good job. Keep up ...

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