Confictura

Hello, danipower. I'm Confictura and overall I like your poem here, My main concern is a mix of signals, but we'll get to that later. I cannot tell you what ...

You definitely need a lot of work on your structure. I think your problem is "You write like you speak" While this may be okay in some cases, this sounds ...

I Nod approvingly at your mastercrafted epic tale with a handsome and charming character that is awesome an unexplored topic, the manifestation of death in and of itself is a ...

Renny McRenners, This is fantastic. Anything I said would be redundant except for the things that I'm going to whine about later, but noone here needs to see that :)

Since everything else has been nit-picked to the bone, I just wanted to ask about one thing that bothered me. How did the letter get back to Europe? If they ...

Hello there! this is my first "Quoted Review" so I'm not familiar with how the format will end up looking. I will be commenting using red text. In the silence ...

Ahhh! I want to know what she wrote on the Post-it note! I want to know so bad! And I want to know what's happening! I get the feelings of ...

Oh my. Oh dear, oh no. This story, has made me laugh. Not a chuckle, nor a giggle. I. LAUGHED . Full/wholeheartedly. I absolutely LOVE this story, other than a ...

I didn't even need to read half of this to know that this piece is horrid, steriotypical, and insulting. Don't continue writing, for the sake of everyone else, please. By ...

This seems like a very cool start to a nice story, I've always liked the stories where there is an orderly and sometimes fascist system in place that the main ...