CollinWitte

Hi faith! Thanks for the review! Everyone is wrong my syllables are so magic stick.

Hello Caroline, I got the idea from the time a ran away, in winter...lol! I'm so glad I am not that stupid anymore hehe. why didn't I think of blossoms! ...

Thank you Emma! I try! :) You 're the first comment I have ever gotten on this site that doesn't have any nitpicks! Ur amazing!

This is an amazing review! I think you could pursue a career in reviewing art (of any kind) ... it is difficult to do well and I feel like this ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you for the feedback!

Thank you! :)

Well I guess it wouldn't make sense to you, since you don't know much about poetry haha. But thank you for your comment. :)

Sorry forgot to answer your question WriterBre! I got the idea while thinking about racism. I know some folks with really restricted points of view, which I don't agree with. ...

Sorry forgot to answer your question WriterBre! I got the idea while thinking about racism. I know some folks with really restricted points of view, which I don't agree with. ...

So many nitpick, but thank you! :)

Thank you! :) This is my first story.

The full story is now in the Green Room. Maybe it wasn't appropriate to divide into chapters, so to speak. The pacing was connected to the idea of quick action. ...

The full story is now in the Green Room. Maybe it wasn't appropriate to divide into chapters, so to speak. Love to hear what you think! : )

Thanks Noelle! This was my first time posting. I am going to post the entire story into the novels section and see if that fits better. Thanks for the suggestions!