ColdOne

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for pointing that out by the way. Margaret will definitely be showing up later.... :)

Well, you have me hooked. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this. It seems like there's some sort of myth that you're starting, and I'm interested on how ...

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Well, you have me hooked. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this. It seems like there's some sort of myth that you're starting, and I'm interested on how ...

It seems like my comment duplicated for some reason. Apologies.

Don't worry, those questions will be answered later on, and thank you for grabbing those spelling mistakes.

Oh my goodness.... I didn't even notice it cut me off. There is more. I try and see if I can add it.

Ooo I really enjoyed this. Your way of describing the environment is absolutely immersive and delicious. Maybe try adding some more detail of senses other than sight? Still really good ...

Hi there. I want to start off my saying that this was wonderfully writen. It really gave me the feel that some one from the renaissance era. Saying that, I ...

This was beautiful. If I'm right this was about love and lose that love, and wanting redemption for the stupid things that made some one lose love. Even if I'm ...

I really enjoy this. You found a way to beautifully describe one of the most foul though of creature now-a-days. That was only the first reason though. The second reason ...