CodyKnight

I'd like to thank you for taking the time to read my story. I truly appreciate it, and the reason I mention this on the top is that I have ...

It hardly matters, my amount of free days allowed by Amazon are over now unfortunately, I'll be deleting this post when I make it back to my computer.

Thanks for checking my story out! And yes, if you do review the next 2 parts that I have on here so far that would be awesome! I love feedback, ...

Ha, it's no worry, I just appreciate you finding the time to read it; let alone find the time to catch the mistakes you did! I know i keep saying ...

Thank you for reading my follow up, I was hoping you'd check it out but it seemed... I don't know; needy I guess, to ask you to review my next ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my first chapter! As you guys pointed out, it was a bit long to post on here (newbs, amirite?) so ...

Well, i took what you said into full consideration and touched up the off aspects of it. I embellished a little on the guards not wanting to jump in, and ...

I'd be happy to, I'll get around to a closer proofread later after i finish my own edits. As far as getting another hundred words worked into, maybe you could ...

First, thank you for taking the time to review my first chapter! Second, thank you for the particularly kind words, I really appreciate your compliments. Thirdly, I appreciate the criticism ...

I appreciate you guys keeping such a close eye on stuff like that. It's been nice joining up with such an active community; it irritates me when caustic people want ...

Aren't you a neat little troll :) Why don't you grow a pair and go irritate people in your own life? much love

Awesome! I truly can't express how much I appreciate it!

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i enjoyed this quite a bit! i enjoy stories that start out with vision-like sequences. Now, i read the rest of the reviews before typing my own, so I don't ...

I hope anyone who reads this likes it, I've been working on it for a little while now and just finished editing it yesterday. I was hoping to get some ...