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thanks ^^

-nods- yeah I'll try to dream up new stuff or sumthin' thanks guys

thanks guys! ^^ always good to here some advice/complements.. :p

^^ thanks for the advice i'll look around to making a 2nd draft or somthin' :]

I loved it! It's very simple and straight to the point at hand. This is written very powerful and just a slap in the face ending. (good thing.. : P) ...

Thanks for the advice so far : ]

I liked it.. there were some errors but mostly all right. The second stanza was just "Wow", Captialize those i's other than that it was a pretty decent poem. Good ...

Nice job. Kinda spacey but I really enjoyed the ending, It was a good first one though.. a little dull but it just needs some visuals and your good to ...

Awesome! really enjoyed it. : D