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Re: Satan's Children
This legitimately reminds me of my own personal writing style in a certain sense. ...Not sure anyone else would agree with that haha But either way -- very captivating and ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Reflection in the Water
Yes -- welcome to the site. This was, in my personal opinion, very vivid and descriptive for a ~500 word story; a lot of hidden symbolism; a lot that's left ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: For life or for death
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this. You seem to have developed a very intriguing style, and I feel like with the parenthesis on ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: I Have Loved
wow... just wow. Incredibly well-written with apparent meaning. I really felt like I could connect to it on a very personal level. Very captivating, and almost sort of chilling opening; ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Risk
Hey. Very well written tale in my opinion! I thoroughly enjoyed this for several reasons. First and foremost, there were no major spelling or grammatical errors that I was able ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: "Bleeding Puppets"
Oh! I've only been on this site now for maybe a week or two, but this is the first script that I've read so far, and it was a great ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: That Other World
wow! there was a lot captured in this poem and it really made me think deeply, more than you may have originally intended. I didn't really notice any spelling or ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Red Falls
My initial, instinctive response to this story was that, if it's not based any all on true events, than you have quite the vivid imagination and I have no doubt ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Arbitration: Chapter 1
Hey. So I have mixed emotions after reading this story - take it as you will. First and foremost I'll start off with something positive I could help but notice, ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: The evening I didn't see coming
I loved it! Very well written. I could relate on so many levels. To start, it was descriptive and kept my attention all the way through. I thought it was ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Empty House/Men Like Candles
I thought this was very detailed and very well written. I quite thoroughly enjoyed it, and loved the analogies you used in almost every verse, especially referring to God as ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Here Be Dragon
This was actually quite amazing. I really enjoyed it. The storyline in and of itself seems like a pretty traditional tale to me - a classic story of two individual ...
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Because I Am Afraid
I really felt like I was able to connect and relate to this. Very descriptive writing, and a basic sort of story but told in a very creative manner. At ...
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: The Graveyard
I really enjoyed this. I captured my attention right from the start. The opening paragraph is filled with description of what Claudette looks like, and really does an excellent job ...
Dec 16, 2013
