Cloudless

yea I will defiantly read book one! I should probably start it before I run into any spoilers!

As always thank you ferran!

Anytime!

Alright thanks! I'll do that right away

Sorry accidently posted twice. Look below. XD

Hey there! I really appreciate your review. It's good to know that there wasn't many blaring mistakes. Also I honestly thank you for such detailed compliments. It lets me know ...

Hey! Thank you very much for your feedback! I will take your reivew to heart. Even though you haven't read the past chapters, thinking back, I do agree with you. ...

Hey Ferran! Thanks for the feedback! I will make those changes right away. I actually have to go back and check if I mentioned silver eyes in the first chapter. ...

Hey thanks for the feedback! I also liked the fight scene. I will take you up on your advice and defiantly put that later on. In fact I've already thought ...

Alright thanks for the feedback! I'll fix those things right away

Heya Ryu! I will take your feedback seriously and work on making the changes as soon as possible :)

In response to A, yea I think that her concern is pretty realistic. When something is wrong, she ran to her dad. I also think that her utmost confidence in ...

Actually I am replacing this chapter with an updated version. I decided to change the characters roles in the story, incorporate race clashes, and introduce my cast more slowly. Even ...

Hey! Thank you so much for the review! I really gained a lot from your feedback so I can make this story better! Thanks :)