Clonkey99

This is really sad! ;( Thanks for sharing your story! :) I think this story was really nice but the only thing I can pick at is basic grammar- capitalisation, ...

Wow! This is really great. I love the allusion to Queen Sheba! You have loads of literary techniques so I can't fault you there! :) Maybe what you could do ...

I really like this poem and I think it is pretty well written. :) I really like the way you split up the colours! It was an interesting and uniques ...

WOW. This is really great that you are expressing your opinions and staying true to what you believe in. This is a good concept but if you were to re ...

Really loving this poem! The description is pretty good and I like the variation in sentence length. (If it is all to long or short is gets boring and doesn't ...

On a whole I really like this poem! :) The description of the wolf is very well written and I really like the detail and use of imagery. Maybe their ...