Clockworks

I'm not sure about this one... You don't seem to have much consistency between your stanzas. The reins of reason may have slipped Momentarily from my grip. I wasn't worried, ...

I noticed that you used the word Amaranth. I find this intruiging because when you describe the flower in other parts of the poem, you are describing it as if ...

This is adorable! I wish I got poems for Valentine's Day. :P Even though I don't do the whole commercial part of Valentine's Day. Your phrases flow from one to ...

You are a young writer, but everyone under the age of 25 is too, hence the name of this site. Your poem is simple, which isn't a bad thing, but ...

Beautiful things Happen to beautiful girls, She is the girl I met today. The last line in this stanza doesn't flow with the first two lines, although I can see ...

Short and sweet but it really brings home the reality of how easy it is for a child to go missing. I liked it, but I would change the word ...

You have a lot of good imagery here, consistancy linking it together much the way an old book is held together with thread or stitching. Very well done. My eye ...