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This story... is FANTASTIC. I love the helpless neuroticism of the MC. It's so entertaining, and the way it's written just makes me keep reading eagerly to find out what ...

Most of the nitpicking's aside. I really liked this story. It's very sweet, and I like stories about friendship. Heart-warming! :D I don't think I've ever read a story with ...

Her name is Dailey? I bow to you. For sheer awesome genius. I am so amused. The slang way this is written is great. I want to see where it ...

I like-a the love triangle. I'm loving Mark and his promiscuity. I want to see more of what's up with this guy. :D I'm surprised Jeff doesn't rank in the ...

Amazing opening sentence. :shock: I love it! As of late the thoughts that seemed to be taking [s]about[/s] the most space in her brain were those of her parents Her ...

Oh, you can write fiction honey! It was just as beautiful as I had remembered. I had not been back in over fifteen years but it seemed as if nothing ...

It does sound like a good book. Especially since I did enjoy Speak. But it's kind of weird that the plot is almost exactly the same, if just for the ...

A few spelling errors. A wail sounded in the usualy quiet nieghborhood Usualy = usually With in the dark house some one flicked on a lamb. It should be within ...

Ditto with the dialogue, but everyone's said that. So easy to fix though. The storyline is interesting, but walks a thin line between being unoriginal. But I'm sure it's just ...

First and foremost, because you're new, I just need to point out that along with posting your own stories, you need to review others as well to earn points. I ...

I love your description of the pursuit of the elk. It's so exciting! And written well too. I'm definitely loving this story! Many hearts I throw at it!!! She hates ...

I am very drawn into this story. About the show, not tell thing - it is something to avoid, but also something a lot of popular authors do. :wink: Try ...

Wow! What did she do to deserve this? I am totally hooked. I like werewolf stories, but I feel that so few good ones have been written. This has me ...

Eros and Psyche is my FAVORITE Greek myth, and I absolutely adore what you've written here! I never imagined somebody writing it out in detail. Your dialogue is believable and ...

A good, interesting story. The writing's very smart sounding. I feel dazzled by the sci-fi speak! Almost every nitpicking thing has already been pointed out. Here... New York Times read ...