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"I can put it back [s]it[/s] if you like." The driver grunted out his reasons for passage when the Officer said: "Sir, have you seen two young boys? They went ...

Hey EliteHusky! He had been on the Hungarian vessel for slightly over a day and presumed he would be staying longer but early this morning the entire dormitory of Irish ...

Heeey-a Shafter! The little song should be in italics. If it already is then I'm sorry - this site is being weird for me right now. :P I really, really ...

Hey Toomak! :D The man ran through the streets, the streetlights casting a glow all around him. He was about six feet tall, with long, shoulder-length blond hair, [s]and big ...

Hey Sofi! This does read like poetry, but I have to agree with what Sam and Snoink said about the abstract. Abstract is a good thing, but I have nothing ...

@_@ Goodness! This is definitely my favorite thing I've read from you so far. And everything of yours seems fantastic so- Anyway. Hooray Regina Spektor! *li'l dance* Husayn loved to ...

Hi Tanith!! Her eyes wandered around the well furnished room well-furnished including a kind size mahogany wood bed and an antique dresser that probably cost Li'l typo. *points up* "I'm ...

Mark awoke to the sun clipping through his torn shades. I like the opening line. =D He turned once more, now lying on his right shoulder he curled up toward ...

First off - I love the name Bastian. :D “HOW DID SHE DO THAT?” It's best not to use caps lock in right. Try italicizing instead. “Is it really possible ...

Welcome to YWS, Mythmon! :smt039 They had developed their skills along side each other, "alongside" She smiled, and then looked more closely at the occupants of the room, scanning the ...

And then she felt the rush of heat envelop her. "envelope" This is a lovely story. I like the mixture of lyrics and storyline. The only thing I can think ...

Hey Tosh! Welcome to YWS! *knows Spanish* Maybe you should have a key somewhere for those who don't. Describe Alej a little more. I'm a little unsure why he should ...

In fact, some of its residents found that it had terrible weather I think you should rephrase the last part, since it sounds a little lame with the prior sentence. ...

Her head swung as she talked. The way puppets do when you twist the back bar, I think that sentence should be apart of the following paragraph. The way puppets ...

Hey bunnie you are! :D The first thing I saw was the newspaper. It read of a man who died while trying to save his kid from drowning, my kid. ...