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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kyren's last hope

    Hey muse! Welcome to YWS! ^_^ I gave her a look of death, hoping she understood that I was possessed by my hate; and love. This semi-colon is incorrect. Semi-colons ...

    Aug 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: All Babies Are Blessings (4)

    Hey Dommy! I couldn't find your first part, so I'm just gonna review this one, since it looks interesting. My parents probably wouldn't let me still live at my house ...

    Aug 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Seducing Marshall

    Hey, Cal! ^_^ He has had his hands on girl’s bodies before This is such a little thing... "girls' bodies." I disagree with Jiggity about the action. I think that ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: On Robin Hood and Wheelchairs

    Kylan!! *hugs* I'm here as requested. Pretty much you can always ask me to review your stuff... I just love it. Audy closed his eyes and received the images slowly, ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Who Would've Thought? 1

    Hey Salsa! I will be your reviewer for today. *waves* =D Quote: Mr. and Mrs. Stark were very good friends with my parents, they had met way back when, and ...

    Aug 5, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Breaking Dawn

    Whoa... Alice, you just made me realize I didn't cry. I cry at every book that is even slightly sad. I get too wrapped up in every single storyline. That ...

    Aug 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Kate Has 8 Lives :Chapter 5

    Curley!!! *glomp* Kates eyes flew open, and was overcome by what was once a white background had turned into the dimmer lights of a hospital room. "and she was overcome" ...

    Aug 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pink High Tops and Buterfly Wings

    Kaila~Marieeee~ I banged my head down onto my desk. I was sick of the constricting business suit I practically slept in. I longed for the days filled with pink high ...

    Aug 4, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    I'm a fan of Edward. I never understood those signs for "Edward or Jacob?" in book stores. It always seemed very obvious that it was Edward. Meyer pretty much admitted ...

    Aug 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Petra pt 1

    Hey Olivia! Sex, drugs and rock and roll... the best story lead-ins. :D I'm also happy to see a story with a University setting. Since this a youth-aimed website, I ...

    Aug 3, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 血まみれの糸 「There is Blood in the Thread」(1)

    Ohmahgoodness! Decemberists! What a wonderful song too, so much story to work with - I drew a picture based off this song once. It's like impossible to not try to ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 6

    Aw, KJ, I didn't "complain" about length. ^_^ I’d only seen a human once before in my life: A trader that had come to our home The a shouldnt be ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Siren's Ballpoint

    Hey Kylan! Michel, who had painted his life all over the side of a wall from an aerosol spray can, sat naked, strapped to a dentist's chair, and surrounded by ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Goddess [2]

    Hey Moriah, Her Father’s funeral was a simple affair held that evening. Father shouldn't be capitalized. Josette had arranged for all of the men to receive an extra share of ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live From Sheboygan

    Yay morestufffrom yooou . ^_^ If Wisconsin was white trash, Sheboygan was a landfill. Its trailer parks teemed with broken lawn chairs and Wal Mart pajamas and long-haired boys, where ...

    Jul 30, 2008


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