ClinicalCynic

First off, let me say thank you for the wonderful reviews that you have left on my stories. They are much appreciated. I absolutely love this story. It's wonderfully written. ...

Okay, first off I would like to say that I like it. I'm just going to add a few suggestions. I laugh. I smile. I giggle. I would consider selecting ...

Fingers type the words you see, Eyes unseen read words on screen, These first two lines were gorgeous in a minimalistic sense. A message, a note, the reverberation Of a ...

Ignition—a madhouse of scarlet and sulfur, I loved the imagery within this line snarled together in dissonant chords, blasting against the framework of what could not be, what should not ...

I absolutely loved this. I'm a huge fan of Ancient Mythology and this was wonderfully written. I would have loved to see the Gods developed a bit more. Are they ...

I simply loved your use of imagery in this piece. It was nothing short of gorgeous. There were some punctuation erros as was stated by someone else, but overall I ...

I loved the story! It was interesting to read. I liked your use of higher vocabulary words instead of opting for the less-educated approach. It added a flair of wisdom ...

I adored this. The emotion is conveyed in a concise manner. It's very applicable to people. Everyone has felt "lost" at some point in their life so everyone can relate ...

I liked the poem. It was solemn but not so much that I was left wanting to go sit in a dark corner and loathe the world. I think my ...

Overall I really liked the poem. It was a bit different to read in the beginning but I soon became accustomed to it. I loved the fast-paced motion you kept ...

Very well written! I loved the title. It was simple and catchy and easily drew in the reader. The wording was nice. Although the commas and phrasing made it a ...