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ClearNights

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Poet's Lark

    Wow is my first opinion of this. I loved reading your poem, and hearing how it flows. Your rhyming skills are incredible!! I often find myself struggling to rhyme, so ...

    May 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Distant Lover

    Starting off, I really enjoyed your poem, on the surface it may seem like a simple little poem, but once you read it and think about it, there’s a deeper ...

    May 13, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Bella and the black box

    To start out, I really liked this piece of writing, it tells a story. I especially liked the metaphor in the beginning (pretty sure that’s the correct terminology) of “Snow ...

    May 13, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the curse of the vanishing jewel

    I really enjoyed reading this! I how your use of descriptive writing really helped me form an image in my head of the surroundings as well as what was going ...

    May 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: box of colors

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. Especially the ending really interested me/captivated me, as it was kind of relatable, the wanting to escape from regular life. I really liked your ...

    May 10, 2024


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