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Re: Ruptured Mind 3.2 (Ever-changing title)
Short review this time ;)
Aug 21, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.3, Edited 1]
I'm so sorry it took me so long to get around to this, I've been slacking off a lot lately. And... There's really not much to talk about. Everyone else ...
Aug 12, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 6
I hope it helped :)
Aug 2, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 6
I hope it helped :)
Aug 2, 2015 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 2
Welp, there ain't much to say that hasn't been said. So I'll leave this one at that.
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Timmy, I'm jealous. I know it's a sin, but how could I not be? I've gone over this chapter three times, I've looked and looked but couldn't find anything to ...
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: The Damage (Ch. 1)
I'd love to elaborate. Thanks for asking. Actually it was all pretty much nested in a single thing: there was no conflict. There were hints at a conflict -that did ...
Jul 22, 2015 -
Re: A new death.
Stephen King has a writing rule that goes as follows: If someone says they don't like an element of my story that I do like I generally ignore them, because ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter One
Hm, you seem to have misinterpreted what I was saying. I can't take seven foot lizards seriously as a threat (because I have a lizard and know the biggest threat ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: My Sister Gives me Red Roses
That was... inventively horrific. You took something that sounded sweet and heartwarming and turned it into a swirling pile of evilness. Now I'm not much of a poetry guy, it's ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Calibrate: Chapters 1-5
I'm glad I helped. :)
Jun 20, 2015
