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Re: The Silver Ribbon
Hello :) I read this over a couple times, and I can't help but think how much better this piece would be if you converted it into a narrative poem. ...
Dec 22, 2012 - Re: The last time I really cried Dec 22, 2012
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Re: I knew it would be raining
Hello :) When reading this poem, I continue to question the connection between the rain and your sadness, which is something that you do not expand on here. I feel ...
Dec 21, 2012
