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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Old high school projects autumn mash-up

    No problem! I'm glad to help!

    Aug 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: The Mal (Ch. 1) (Teaser)

    You're welcome! : )

    Aug 6, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Script

    You're welcome for the review! :)

    Mar 30, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: Chrysalis

    You're welcome! :)

    Mar 30, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Childhood-Short Story?

    You're welcome for the review! I understand the concept that your writing class has about rough drafts; a class that I took did the same thing too. They recommended "freewriting," ...

    Sep 21, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Wind Running in My Hair

    Hi! Thank you so much for your review! By brake pedals, I meant coaster brakes. I didn't know the specific term back then, and I only just found the word. ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Oldredia

    Aw, this makes me so happy! I'm glad you read my review and that it helped you get a sense of what the readers might think! I completely understand that ...

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: 𝓛𝓪𝓭𝔂 𝓸𝓯 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓑𝓮𝓪𝓼𝓽

    I'm glad that it helps you!

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Wind Running in My Hair

    Hi! Thanks for the review. oops, I completely understand your critique about long lines, and I'll definitely keep that in mind. I don't exactly write a lot of dialogue (I ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Wind Running in My Hair

    Hi! Thank you for the review! The main point of the story was about committing a small crime, but I get how it might be a little underwhelming. Ah, dialogue. ...

    Sep 2, 2019


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