ChyrsoStemma

Oh, okay

Thanks! I will definatly go over it again and fix those problems.

I was just suggesting a way to re word it, But the way you fixed it works too. I actually wasn't sure if you would like it the way I ...

This is very good. The only thing that I found that on the second line there wasn't punctuation. Other than that, it is very good. You have very nice wording ...

Oh okay. Sorry!

Thank you!

Thanks for that, and it's not harsh, don't worry. I like constructive criticism, so it's okay.

Thanks! I will go back over it and fix it. And the reason why they don't like them is explained later on

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This is really good. The first paragraph grabs your attention and sets an air of mysterious ness that leads to you wanting more. The code names are very different, and ...

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This is really good. The first paragraph grabs your attention and sets an air of mysterious ness that leads to you wanting more. The code names are very different, and ...

This was written very well and grabbed my attention immediately. You did very well on making it short, but to where it makes you want more. The only mistake is ...

This was good, except at first it didn't grab my attention as much as the last paragraph. From my point of view, you could have added in a few conversations ...