ChubakaWooky

I'm afraid to add more detail because I don't want to draw attention away from the main message I am trying to convey.

Thank you so much! (also i have a thing for cute nerds...) Its not supposed to tie in to the first part too much. The first part is one analysis ...

Truely, I wrote this to point out that humans tend to think that the more make up you wear, the better your hair looks, and the cooler your style of ...

Thank you for your input! Not to be stubborn (which I am) but I like to keep things short and sweet. Perhaps I can put a little more detail to ...

Well i cant explain it because I'm not sure I know the meaningmyself.

Among other things...

Thank you! What I love to do is bury the true meaning very deep in the poem. You would be very surprised to know that 1) its about physical appearance ...

I'm just putting suggestions out there. All the pentameter things are just traits that add some spice to a poem (Shakesphere, for example, had a habit of using iambic meters). ...

Oh my gosh, this poem really spoke to me! I love it a lot (I don't really know why though...). I don't see anywhere that needs improvement; the bluntness of ...

Actually, I think you will be surprised to know that this poem actually points out how humans act like wild animals under certain circumstances. If you replace the animalistic words ...

Thank you! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. This is the first of 7 as i said in the description and I plan on posting more when I get ...