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Re: Chapter 2: Never say never, except when it's the truth.
Hi again! Sorry it's been awhile since my last review- I've been pretty busy. Thanks for returning the favor, by the way! So, let's get into the review... I really ...
Aug 14, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1: The only difference between werewolves and sisters is the way they do their hair.
Hey, I'm here for a last minute Review Day review!! First of all, I LOVE this first chapter. Your characters, writing style, and plot are all superb so far! The ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1: The only difference between werewolves and sisters is the way they do their hair.
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Jul 29, 2018
Hey, I'm here for a last minute Review Day review!! First of all, I LOVE this first chapter. Your characters, writing style, and plot are all superb so far! The ... -
Re: A Short walk To An Icy Lake
Hey there! I'll do my best to review your piece, sorry if it's hard to follow. I love the imagery in your descriptions- it really paints a picture of the ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: SHE
Hey, Sree! Sorry I took so long to get to this. I'll just make a few comments and suggestions :). First of all, my favorite line(s) of your piece is ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: I do not love you
I really liked the mood of your poem, and how it was very imagery-centered but also not perfectly fluid and flowing. The writing itself almost conveyed the narrator's feelings and ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: One Turn Past Loose - Part One
Your short story is chilling so far. There's no other word for it. The way you started with a little peek into Jeanne's life was excellently written- it added to ...
Jul 14, 2018 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Two
Yay! I'm glad to be reading Chapter Two- I've been meaning to read more, but I just haven't the time. Wonderful character-building. I especially like how easy and witty the ...
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: Forgotten Times
Your story has a very whimsical and melancholy feel. I like your choice of placing most of the details on her days with the faeries and leaving out details when ...
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: Magpie (Part 1)
I am in love with this so far, and I don't say that lightly. It has the perfect feel of a short story, and a lovely contrast between the innocence ...
Jul 12, 2018
