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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 2: Never say never, except when it's the truth.

    Hi again! Sorry it's been awhile since my last review- I've been pretty busy. Thanks for returning the favor, by the way! So, let's get into the review... I really ...

    Aug 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1: The only difference between werewolves and sisters is the way they do their hair.

    Hey, I'm here for a last minute Review Day review!! First of all, I LOVE this first chapter. Your characters, writing style, and plot are all superb so far! The ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1: The only difference between werewolves and sisters is the way they do their hair.

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    Hey, I'm here for a last minute Review Day review!! First of all, I LOVE this first chapter. Your characters, writing style, and plot are all superb so far! The ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Short walk To An Icy Lake

    Hey there! I'll do my best to review your piece, sorry if it's hard to follow. I love the imagery in your descriptions- it really paints a picture of the ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: SHE

    Hey, Sree! Sorry I took so long to get to this. I'll just make a few comments and suggestions :). First of all, my favorite line(s) of your piece is ...

    Jul 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: I do not love you

    I really liked the mood of your poem, and how it was very imagery-centered but also not perfectly fluid and flowing. The writing itself almost conveyed the narrator's feelings and ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: One Turn Past Loose - Part One

    Your short story is chilling so far. There's no other word for it. The way you started with a little peek into Jeanne's life was excellently written- it added to ...

    Jul 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Two

    Yay! I'm glad to be reading Chapter Two- I've been meaning to read more, but I just haven't the time. Wonderful character-building. I especially like how easy and witty the ...

    Jul 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Forgotten Times

    Your story has a very whimsical and melancholy feel. I like your choice of placing most of the details on her days with the faeries and leaving out details when ...

    Jul 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Politics Re: Magpie (Part 1)

    I am in love with this so far, and I don't say that lightly. It has the perfect feel of a short story, and a lovely contrast between the innocence ...

    Jul 12, 2018


“Writing fiction is the act of weaving a series of lies to arrive at a greater truth.”
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