ChocoDanish

sorry for the spam i dunno how to delete it

yeah i need review points and please explain more on the comma thing. i'm not a professional writer. writing is my coping and venting mechanism so my writing will be ...

nope the bubbles are actual bubbles. please read that carefully. As I am getting further into your story -- the second chapter -- I notice that the dialogue isn't written ...

nope the bubbles are actual bubbles. please read that carefully. As I am getting further into your story -- the second chapter -- I notice that the dialogue isn't written ...

op?

i'm already in my 2nd arc

is there a chapter 1?

cliffhanger!!!

I'm terrible at fight scene. Yeah it a new book. The second arc is still W.I.P. I hate too much space. It a personal thing. I dunno why I hate ...

I wonder how Epi got captured

grim first thing came to mind is the grim reaper

I didn't say I didn't like it. Just cliche. well shadowhunters is an example. May Nova character grows.

will there be more description of Ayda in the further chapters. Thx it helps. Really wanna what those fairies look like cause there is lots of fairies stories like Strange ...

labyrinth?

i like the stairs part XD