ChiravianSkies

*Reads first sentence* Oh... um... *Hides Stoneslide's prologue* Anyways, yeah. Thanks for the review. I like writing long prologues for a reason. Maybe it's so I can get a little ...

No. I mean I like his character a lot, not that he's a manic-pixie-dream-cat. Too awesome was meant in a good way too. :)

The "Get the away" was a bit of a mistake on my part. It was supposed to say "Get the h*** away" but then I decided that there's such a ...

Don't worry. I'm writing as quickly as a can. I guess my inspiration was a doodle where I was planning a "Moses" story set in the reeallly far future. . ...

Sorry, I just wanted to point out a cool fact. Humans have 3 types of colour-receptive cones, Red, Green, and Blue. And look at the spectrum we see in the ...

Yes, the mice are bipedal. They prefer the two-legged approach even if their balance is sacrificed for it. It allows them to do what they want to. And I have ...

Thank you, Archer! I'll admit, I've personified the mice to near-anthropomorphism. They walk on their hind legs more than all fours. (Think of it like Ratatouille, almost.) It's not really ...

Heh. The squirrels in this story are all pacifist healers. Unless they're Leurce, and even then he was exiled. XD Thanks for the review.

Sorry, Neutral? I don't know exactly what you mean. Highwhisker is the city's leader, whom the Guildless are rebelling against.

Yeah, nothing really is simple in that place. It's kind of funny because everything's connected in even the simplest of ways.

Thank you! I'd like to bring up the title. Well, Frozenmoon's army was pretty much destroyed in the prologue of Stoneslide. In the Mice's world, it literally means Hell. So, ...

Thank you for the review! I kind of wanted to address the Guildless and Factionless. I'd kinda like to start with saying the factionless were all kicked out because they ...

Thank you Elinor! This was a really trimmed down version of the prologue, so maybe a lot of what I've cut is the extra world-building tidbits anymore. (And I realized ...

The Gatherers' complex is a hot tub, inside the wood and framework. And Hazelwood and Fleck *kinda* get along, but only when there's something to be impressed by. It's almost ...

No problem. I think asterisks would work well. When I said unfazed, she looked like she was reacting more to Miles than the other strange events. But then again, she ...