Chirantha

You know, your story can even compete the best-sellers. So much realism, much imagination, I can literally feel myself living and joining the characters in that story. Feeling their pain, ...

I disagree Caitlin. The updated version seems to jump into the story and seemed to leave the reader dazzled and wondering where in the world they have fallen into. This ...

You know, the only thing I can say for this story is, W O W. The way you have written the story was completely realistic and natural. From the time ...

A prologue is a part of a story in which you show a tiny part of your plot to reader, or try to make the reader curious about what lies ...

Hey there, Fruits_Basket, mind if I review this? Alright, same as Hawkie, I have never watched 'Fruits_Basket' series, and don't know anything about it. So, I won't be able to ...

Before I review this, tell me from which country are you? Sri lanka or Australia? First of all, this story belongs in the Non-Fiction section as it contains a biographical ...

Okay, this poem seems a bit confusing. I mean, for the first thing, what are you talking about? I know it's a expression of your feelings. But about what? A ...

No!! There is no way in the world that this story is going to continue without Liz. No sirreeee. I absolutely refuse to read it. *Taps feet expectantly* Fine, but ...

Hey, sorry for not reviewing it earlier. But, here I am. He didn’t mention anything about the night before, but I figured that he had heard what had transpired by ...

Nice poem. It had a powerful meaning which made me read it until the end in rapt attention :D That's one of the good qualities a poem can have. To ...

Firstly, there is a rule in YWS that states clearly that you should do atleast two reviews at first before you can start posting your own creations. Once you do ...

Well, to tell you the truth, I haven't read the Twilight series, so I really don't know it's plot, but I can guess alot of it. :D Who was this ...

Firstly, your stories are good, and have got more better than the first one. You have added more descriptions and had let the reader understand what you are saying in ...

My my my! This is really nice poem. For second there, I actually thought you were asking for help. :D Why can't I be perfect? Why can't I love anyone? ...

This was a nicely written story. I like the way you have swirled the plot around. :D Okay, the first thing I noticed was how you tried to explain more ...