ChimpanzeeMinkey

Once again I looooved it!!!! I don't think there are words to describe how much I'm craving more of this story! So first just a few nitpicks: watching the room ...

Very compelling! The only huuuge problem with this is that there isn't any more of it to read! So I thought you did well, very well! I think everyone picked ...

So I'm going to try and review this. Firstly I really liked this! It has a good flow and a lovely melancholy tone to it. Here goes: To the little ...

This was not unlike a lovely painting, i know it's not about a painting but I can't help but see it (at least a little bit) that way. I actually ...

Okaaay firstly this was cute and very humorous. Good job doing the best with a pretty odd subject. I wanted to wipe that bead of sweat off my forehead, but ...

I loved this as well! The wording is genius and has a lovely sprinkle of mystery to it. Nothing seemed out of place to me. Oh yes and the rhythm ...

So I just have to say I really, reeallly liked this! It almost felt like jumbled, fragments but it was lovely and it makes sense if you stop and think ...

This is so cute! I love the idea of the brain communicating with the heart in the form of a letter, very creative. I also really liked how the first ...

Good job on your first poem! It has a great flow and imagery. I like that you used poppies instead of something more cliche. This is a somewhat old/used subject ...

I also held off on reading this because I was under the impression it was some crazy 'I love math' poem. Which i have no problem with it just wouldn't ...

This was brilliant! I'm going to join the general opinion here and say I loooved it! For how short this is you gave death a surprisingly graspable character and it ...

The only thing that really stood out to me as needing a change was this line: Alarm clocks are screams, The wording is a bit off. Maybe something more like ...